Through the broken window,as the shimmering sunlight
lightens up darkened memories,
faint images, blurred by the ripples of time,
surfaces up,
against the calm ocean of my mind.
The ripples slowly spread across the surface
Leaving behind the reminiscence of days gone by.
-BK
nice one ….
u dont need any comments ur work is always nice………
I agree with shraddha…
I usually don’t prefer reading poems, as I find most of them difficult to understand. But your poems are simple and elegant, which a person like me would love to read. 🙂
Good Image N Nice Blog Buddy
nice one ……..keep posting
Thanks Abhinav..
thanks for ur generous compliments..
i’ll be posting more of my poems.. 🙂
@ lfanaga.. thanks for ur comments buddy..
thanks mr 69..
do you have feeds?
yes trailblazer.. i do hav feeds..
i’ll put it up for subscription soon..
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